Grace calling home

Between the hills of red clover
the shadows still grow
beyond the whispering in my name
they still speak to me
in the still dark corners
where willows grow

I no longer heed the words
of my fathers
or of their mothers before them
but I hear their voices
and it saddens me still
as I am chained
to the past of lost tranquility

Keep on that path my friend
and don't linger
to hear the creek rush over smooth stones
for those stones are heavy
as chains of not so long ago
where once was peace
but now...

I see on the crest of the hill
the wake of the winds
it reaches down to the hearts
so hope may endure
for lost grace
to call me home again
Posted at Poets and Storytellers United: Writers’ Pantry #32: From Case Studies to Plague Poetry

22 comments:

  1. Life and love often hurt but so do all the wonderful things affects us too with what we achieve and enjoy in our lives.

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    1. True words, Robin. The grace comes from My One and I'm grateful for that. Thanks for stopping by.

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  2. The rushing creek reminds me how time is running out. Are we late getting home?

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    1. Thank you for sharing, Colleen. That's an interesting interpretation that I hadn't thought of. Nice

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  3. Hope has a very strong voice, and it gets stronger when we are willing to hear the call.

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    1. True but sometimes we humans get in the way or become unwilling to hear. Thanks for sharing those thoughts, Magaly. I appreciate it.

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  4. this felt like a spirit being called home to heaven and therefore must hold on to hope.

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    1. I like this interpretation, Humble. I hadn't thought of that. Thank you.

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  5. In tuned with ones surrounding is surely a strong statement of gratitude

    Happy Sunday Joel

    Much💝love

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    1. Thank you, Gillena. That is a wonderful thought and I'm glad you shared.

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  6. Hope may endure..and does. Lovely piece.

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    1. Thank you, Ayala. I'm glad you liked this and I like your thoughts as well of an enduring hope.

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  7. Hope has a way of seeping into our hearts though sometimes we aren't willing to head to its voice. This is a stunning poem, Joel 💝

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    1. You are very kind, Sanaa. Thank you. I appreciate your comments and I'm glad you liked this.

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  8. Even at the bottom of Pandora's box there was said to be hope. If we sit at creekside, somehow nature sends its message of hope. Beautiful write, Joel.

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    1. That's very interesting, Beverly. Thank you. Hope is always something to hang on to but I don't have much time for sitting. Ha!

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  9. It can be so painful when the things that comforted us seem almost to sting more than soothe. But hope is still there, hiding among the ache, and waiting for its turn to shine in the darkness.

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    1. I like this comment, Rommy. I think I should save this for those dry times. Thank you for sharing.

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  10. Everything speaks to us.. but hope has the voice of comfort.

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    1. This is so true. Vivian. Thank you for sharing this thought.

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  11. Sweetly penned. We have to tune it. Hope is heightened in when there are challenges.

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