Between the hills of red cloverPosted at Poets and Storytellers United: Writers’ Pantry #32: From Case Studies to Plague Poetry
the shadows still grow
beyond the whispering in my name
they still speak to me
in the still dark corners
where willows grow
I no longer heed the words
of my fathers
or of their mothers before them
but I hear their voices
and it saddens me still
as I am chained
to the past of lost tranquility
Keep on that path my friend
and don't linger
to hear the creek rush over smooth stones
for those stones are heavy
as chains of not so long ago
where once was peace
but now...
I see on the crest of the hill
the wake of the winds
it reaches down to the hearts
so hope may endure
for lost grace
to call me home again
Grace calling home
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Life and love often hurt but so do all the wonderful things affects us too with what we achieve and enjoy in our lives.
ReplyDeleteTrue words, Robin. The grace comes from My One and I'm grateful for that. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteThe rushing creek reminds me how time is running out. Are we late getting home?
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing, Colleen. That's an interesting interpretation that I hadn't thought of. Nice
DeleteHope has a very strong voice, and it gets stronger when we are willing to hear the call.
ReplyDeleteTrue but sometimes we humans get in the way or become unwilling to hear. Thanks for sharing those thoughts, Magaly. I appreciate it.
Deletethis felt like a spirit being called home to heaven and therefore must hold on to hope.
ReplyDeleteI like this interpretation, Humble. I hadn't thought of that. Thank you.
DeleteIn tuned with ones surrounding is surely a strong statement of gratitude
ReplyDeleteHappy Sunday Joel
Much💝love
Thank you, Gillena. That is a wonderful thought and I'm glad you shared.
DeleteHope may endure..and does. Lovely piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Ayala. I'm glad you liked this and I like your thoughts as well of an enduring hope.
DeleteHope has a way of seeping into our hearts though sometimes we aren't willing to head to its voice. This is a stunning poem, Joel 💝
ReplyDeleteYou are very kind, Sanaa. Thank you. I appreciate your comments and I'm glad you liked this.
DeleteEven at the bottom of Pandora's box there was said to be hope. If we sit at creekside, somehow nature sends its message of hope. Beautiful write, Joel.
ReplyDeleteThat's very interesting, Beverly. Thank you. Hope is always something to hang on to but I don't have much time for sitting. Ha!
DeleteIt can be so painful when the things that comforted us seem almost to sting more than soothe. But hope is still there, hiding among the ache, and waiting for its turn to shine in the darkness.
ReplyDeleteI like this comment, Rommy. I think I should save this for those dry times. Thank you for sharing.
DeleteEverything speaks to us.. but hope has the voice of comfort.
ReplyDeleteThis is so true. Vivian. Thank you for sharing this thought.
DeleteSweetly penned. We have to tune it. Hope is heightened in when there are challenges.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Colleen. You've added some wisdom here.
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