On that day of cold November sky
I looked down to a half-covered stone
somewhat blue-gray under mud
it fit in the palm of my hand
and weighed near a pound and a half.
A cold stone the size of a cold heart
a heavy weight on that old soul
chipped over time where it rested
unnoticed and ignored it was buried
without the light of a warming day.
In restless sleep I dreamt that night
that I sat by the warm oak-wood fire
in silence I listened to the stone's story
its grinding corn by weathered hands
of a grandmother so long ago.
As the stars of Orion crossed overhead
the stone grew in weight in my hands
the wind died and the fireflies fled
as the shout from the stone itself:
"I am not a metaphor!" resonated in my ears.
I woke to write these words down
before they were chased to the wind
trying to make sense from the scene
of stones not willingly metaphors
but really, what do they know?
I found what I think is an old grinding stone on the hill on a cold November day. I usually find bits of concrete or gravel but this was a nice find. It is flattened from apparent wear with a heart-like shape and a few chips from a disc or plow. Of the many possible uses, the grinding stone is most likely.
Or it could be just a rock.
Either way, I like this stone and I sometimes sit to listen to its stories as Orion crosses the sky.
Posted at Poets and Storytellers United: Weekly Scribblings #25: Well, That Was Unexpected
What a wonderful find! May it tell you many good stories as Orion goes over. Beautiful poem too. The unobtrusive repetitions of 'cold' and 'stone' work well in creating both atmosphere and music; and I love the stone's insistence on not being a metaphor.
ReplyDeleteI wonder how many years it has been since it was first shaped and the kinds of people who held it through the years. The stories it could tell would be something.
DeleteI'm glad you liked this, thank you, Rosemary. Your kind words are appreciated.
I love the idea of its being a grinding stone, or a metate as we would call them in the Desert Southwest. Yes, its stories are legion, and may those stories feed you for many years to come!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing that bit of knowledge, MMT. It's always good to learn new word. If I'm quiet and patient, it may speak again.
DeleteEvery stone, shell, weed, flower and on and on and on has a story to tell. I love this poem.
ReplyDeleteThe history that each could tell us, hmm? I'm glad you like this, Helen. Thank you.
DeleteOh, Joel, I think we're kindred spirits … the kind who take time to hear imagined stories told by trees, stones, and the voices of those who passed this way long before. I loved your stone musing!
ReplyDeleteIt's possible that each of us who appreciate the creation that surrounds us, share a special bond. Thank you, Beverly. I'm glad you liked this and I appreciate your kind words.
DeleteI love this so much!💝 I think you were destined to find that stone.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sanaa. You are very kind. I've found several interesting stones as I walk the hills but this one is my favorite.
DeleteI love the idea of the stone as story teller. Clearly it has a lot to say!
ReplyDeleteI think there is another story or two that it might tell me. Thank you, Rommy. I appreciate your kind words.
DeleteThere is a mystery about stones, even though we know the basic science of them, and finding unusual shapes, colours and patterns in them is an enjoyable pastime – especially making up stories about what could be part of a meteor or the stone from which Arthur pulled Excalibur. I love the way you started your poem with the way it fit your hand, the weight, size and the feel of it: ‘A cold stone the size of a cold heart’, and the way it was chipped. It made the finding of it immediate. I also love the stone’s story.
ReplyDeleteThis stone was an interesting find but the picture does not do it justice. If I take it to someone who is knowledgeable about the artifacts, it might ruin the stories.
DeleteThank you, Kim. I appreciate your kind words.
Well humans have been using stones for many thousands of years it is good that you have found one of your own...if it likes you it mighttell you its story!
ReplyDeleteI've been hoping to find something special and this might be it. I hope for a few more stories though. Thanks, Robin.
DeleteVery unexpected that this stone voiced not being metaphor. Luv the surprise
ReplyDeleteMuch💖love
It needed to be said, Gillena. Thank you for your kind words. I do appreciate them.
DeleteA wonderful poem, each stone has a story to tell chipped off from a mountain. I enjoyed reading your poem.
ReplyDeleteEach small stone is part of a larger one just like each story is part of the larger world. Thank you, Nithya. I'm glad you liked this.
DeleteLove this, Joel! The stone speaks up so as not to be misinterpreted. Beautiful writing.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you liked this, Sara. I appreciate your kinds words. Maybe it will speak to me again. Thank you very much.
DeleteAh! This stone that doesn’t wish to be a metaphor- but is- with its chips and weight. Will it ever give in, I wonder?
ReplyDeletePerhaps I am the metaphor for the stone? Thank you for sharing, Vivian. I appreciate your kind words.
DeleteIt looks not unlike one of a pair of grinding stones my parents used between 1980-85. One stone broke before the other showed that much wear, though.
ReplyDeleteCould be much older; many things sold in the 1980s were copies!